Moment in time writing number 2

I was getting ready to jump into my worst
nightmare the hill of leaves. It was big in fact
it was bigger than big it was huge. Three Two
One go my parents said as I start to run to the
ramp. I saw leaves go everywhere. I felt the hard
crunchy leaves on my soft skin. On the inside I
felt like I was jumping off the sky tower. Then
when I hit the ground I heard a crack no split even.
It was my arm I broke my arm

The end

This is my moment in time writing that focus on part of

a story. I used show not tell to make my writing interesting.